MrWeirdGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Threepio Takes a Bath]

what is this i dont even

there are no words
or punctuation

Galneda responds:

Making this review utterly pointless. Still, thanks for watching!

[DBZ UBFE 1]

Not bad.

The fighting and animation was great, but the story isn't very good. Babidi "somehow" comes back? That doesn't make much sense. And if I remember correctly, there's a limit to how long one can use the Hyperbolic Time Chamber in a lifetime, and Goku had already used up his time there. And you had a ton of spelling and grammar errors. Don't just throw some half-assed dialogue in your movie, it doesn't look professional at all. Please, for everyone's sake, make an effort to perfect the script in the future. And if you don't think you can, at least have your friends look it over. It would be well worth it in the long run.

DuDuL responds:

First its fan story... second... oryginal dbz also had bugs... like 3-4 ppl in time chamber... third... i couldnt think of anything better for babidi's comeback... xD

[The Ebay Song]

A decent job with a decent song.

This was a good flash. However, it seemed to be a little bit unanimated. Pretty much all the graphics were images you probably found on Google, and text. You could have drawn and animated your own stuff. But you didn't do too bad with this. I hope to see more of your work in the future!

boner118 responds:

There wasn't much room for animation as the lyrics took up a large amount of the canvas and I wanted to keep with a standard size so as not to have too much at one time; after all I wanted the focus to be on this great song and the lyrics. The images were funnily enough off google, but most needed quite a lot of working .e.g. that dough picture had the word 'copyright' tiled all over it which I edited out and many pictures needed ages to be edited onto a white background. I can't draw that well but don't spread it about lol. I'm getting better at drawing and animating so as I get better the more flashes I will make and the more drawn stuff I will include!

[Supermario Madness-]

Pretty good.

However, I gave you a 2 because you were telling people to vote 5. If you hadn't, I would have easily given this a 4.

ToonCastleTV responds:

Yeah lol shit man I JUST changed that in my submission it doesnt say that anymore

[Hunters - Episode 1]

Very nice animation.

I really enjoyed this. It was longer than I expected, though. I didn't really like your characters' graphics, their heads seemed too circular. But the story and voices more than make up for that. If you improved your graphics, I'm sure you could get into the top 50 of all time.

Rhete responds:

Hey I said it was 14 minutes long in the author comments and I wasnt kidding :P

And yeah the heads are circles, they actually looked worse when I tried to curve it a bit to give them a chin

[link vs zero]

Pretty good for a first time.

Pointing some things out:
Shitty dialogue, ugly text boxes.
However, the fight was pretty cool. I liked the combo counter. One thing I would have liked to see was Link using the power of the Triforce more. And I didn't really like the fact that Zero was evil in this movie.
But overall, you did a pretty good job. I gave it a 3/5. And remember: Spellcheck your dialogue. Use proper grammar. Single-color text boxes work well. I can't wait to see your future work!

kennymty responds:

thank you for your commments and about the history i had to invent a cause why link going to fight with zero . and about the spell i dont know much english

[Perspective XTC-05]

Beautiful.

Front page. NOW.

Champu responds:

Nah.. im not good enough to get onto the front page. o well