MrWeirdGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DBZ UBFE 1]

Not bad.

The fighting and animation was great, but the story isn't very good. Babidi "somehow" comes back? That doesn't make much sense. And if I remember correctly, there's a limit to how long one can use the Hyperbolic Time Chamber in a lifetime, and Goku had already used up his time there. And you had a ton of spelling and grammar errors. Don't just throw some half-assed dialogue in your movie, it doesn't look professional at all. Please, for everyone's sake, make an effort to perfect the script in the future. And if you don't think you can, at least have your friends look it over. It would be well worth it in the long run.

DuDuL responds:

First its fan story... second... oryginal dbz also had bugs... like 3-4 ppl in time chamber... third... i couldnt think of anything better for babidi's comeback... xD

[Kid Icarus - Part IV]

Nice.

The fighting in this flash was pretty good, and I feel the music worked well. However, the one thing that prevents you from getting higher than an 8 overall is the absolutely horrible voice acting. You definitely should have gone with text alone.

[Earthquake Girl]

I don't know what the hell I just watched...

But I loved it.

[Rockman!! Next Attack]

Oh. My God.

I think we may have a new #1 Flash on Newgrounds.

[Sonic's Upgrade Pt.4]

Nice job.

You did a great job animating this. However, you did a terrible job with the dialogue. I consider good grammar and spelling important to story-driven flashes like this one. I voted a 4 on this, but if it has good dialogue, I would have given it a 5.

[Dr Mario - Fever (guitar)]

You still have a way to go.

You guys aren't terrible, but you're not good either. Just kinda... meh. Still, your guitar playing skills are better than mine. But keep practicing, and someday you may become famous.

[The People's Mario]

Holy. Shit.

That was almost TOO AWESOME. I'm nearly speechless. This is just an incredible flash. I can see it being on the main page soon. Very very soon.

[The Ebay Song]

A decent job with a decent song.

This was a good flash. However, it seemed to be a little bit unanimated. Pretty much all the graphics were images you probably found on Google, and text. You could have drawn and animated your own stuff. But you didn't do too bad with this. I hope to see more of your work in the future!

boner118 responds:

There wasn't much room for animation as the lyrics took up a large amount of the canvas and I wanted to keep with a standard size so as not to have too much at one time; after all I wanted the focus to be on this great song and the lyrics. The images were funnily enough off google, but most needed quite a lot of working .e.g. that dough picture had the word 'copyright' tiled all over it which I edited out and many pictures needed ages to be edited onto a white background. I can't draw that well but don't spread it about lol. I'm getting better at drawing and animating so as I get better the more flashes I will make and the more drawn stuff I will include!

[Supermario Madness-]

Pretty good.

However, I gave you a 2 because you were telling people to vote 5. If you hadn't, I would have easily given this a 4.

ToonCastleTV responds:

Yeah lol shit man I JUST changed that in my submission it doesnt say that anymore

[Sonic vs. Shadow 2: T.C.]

Awesome.

Why the hell doesn't this have a higher rating? I loved everything about this flash. It even had a basic tutorial for good sprite movies (and bad ones). I voted 5, because that's what it deserves, dammit.