I have no idea what the hell I just watched...
...but I loved it. 5/5
I have no idea what the hell I just watched...
...but I loved it. 5/5
Very nice animation.
I really enjoyed this. It was longer than I expected, though. I didn't really like your characters' graphics, their heads seemed too circular. But the story and voices more than make up for that. If you improved your graphics, I'm sure you could get into the top 50 of all time.
Hey I said it was 14 minutes long in the author comments and I wasnt kidding :P
And yeah the heads are circles, they actually looked worse when I tried to curve it a bit to give them a chin
Not bad...
...but too short. You have potential, you just need your submissions to be longer.
Pretty good for a first time.
Pointing some things out:
Shitty dialogue, ugly text boxes.
However, the fight was pretty cool. I liked the combo counter. One thing I would have liked to see was Link using the power of the Triforce more. And I didn't really like the fact that Zero was evil in this movie.
But overall, you did a pretty good job. I gave it a 3/5. And remember: Spellcheck your dialogue. Use proper grammar. Single-color text boxes work well. I can't wait to see your future work!
thank you for your commments and about the history i had to invent a cause why link going to fight with zero . and about the spell i dont know much english
You're getting there.
Sadly, this flash will probably be blammed. Test stuff is not suitable material for Newgrounds. But you seem to be getting the hang of Flash. Two things, though:
1) Why'd you give the sun such a weird gradient?
2) The hair blowing could have been animated better. It just looks kinda weird now.
Hopefully you'll get better. I can't wait to see the kind of stuff you'll be making when you're 17 and have a ton more knowledge of Flash.
Pretty cool.
This isn't that bad. Not bad at all. I can't wait to see future episodes.
Hell yeah.
FRONT PAGE. NOW.
Not bad...
This was a decent submission, but there's too much text, and not enough animation. You obviously have potential, but I can't see how something with so much text and so little animation can be accepted. Animation is the key to success when it comes to Flash animations. But good luck in your future submissions.
Beautifully done.
This entry is solid proof that flash animations do not need blood/gore/toilet humor to be good. VERY nicely done.
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